Friday, May 25, 2012

Winner 55 Word Challenge Week Ten

Winner 55 Word Challenge
Week Ten



Sorry for the delay in judging. I’ve been sick off and on the past few weeks and it hit again last night and then a migraine all day today, along with all the last day of school activities. I have the results though, so here goes!



Honorable Mentions:


@rastrohman: This murder story left me chuckling as the murderers realized their very worrisome plot hole.
@klingorengi I’ve always been a fan of myth and this story was a homerun.
@LupusAnthropos I liked the twist at the end of this one. A different kind of ghost story.



WINNER:

I loved the way the whole tale came together.



“Get back,” I said, practically shoving him away from the staircase.

“What the—get back from the stairs? Is there some new regulation to protect pedestrians from the menace of—stairs?”

“No,” I whispered. “There’s just her.”

“Who?”

She floated down, an ethereal façade of calm, passing us without notice.

He shivered in her wake.

@caramichaels
55 words

Cara wins this winners badge and a $5.00 Amazon Gift Card.
Thank you everyone that entered! I look forward to reading next weeks entries.

No comments:

Post a Comment